Hi Hannah, I really liked looking at your work for this first project. I was very impressed with the amount of detail you were able to capture in your photos. The picture of the lock and the chain was the one I was really drawn to. You did an amazing job capturing the very little details you normally would not be able to see. Your framing was also very interesting. You did a great job not leaving your subject in the center of the frame.
Image 2: Good job getting close & abstracting this object. The yellow color contrasts with the rust color. Several curve shapes & lines repeat within the larger shape. The left top gray area doesn't really relate to anything else in the frame. Maybe it could be eliminated by reframing this shot.
Some areas of each image are not in focus. Use higher apertures. Please, avoid words & letters in your photos.
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Hi Hannah, I really liked looking at your work for this first project. I was very impressed with the amount of detail you were able to capture in your photos. The picture of the lock and the chain was the one I was really drawn to. You did an amazing job capturing the very little details you normally would not be able to see. Your framing was also very interesting. You did a great job not leaving your subject in the center of the frame.
ReplyDeleteImage 2: Good job getting close & abstracting this object. The yellow color contrasts with the rust color. Several curve shapes & lines repeat within the larger shape. The left top gray area doesn't really relate to anything else in the frame. Maybe it could be eliminated by reframing this shot.
ReplyDeleteSome areas of each image are not in focus. Use higher apertures.
Please, avoid words & letters in your photos.